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Poem About Candykid Mentality
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» PoiSoNeD_CaNdY replied on Tue Oct 14, 2003 @ 7:00pm |
 Coolness: 92600 | yes, i actually wrote a poem about raves *hangs head in shame*
so read this and then tell me how much it sucks As the late hour advances a clan bounces into the night wearing smiles of anticipation. An empty, faceless space beckons it is here they will unite. The door opens, step inside a carnival of colors, a burst of fire tonight we will touch the stars, we will rise up, ever higher. Hugs and drugs, toys and poi. The walls shake, the roof lifts, an explosion of chemical joy. "Last song!" says the dj, all highs and energy expended. The music stops, faces drop, all would be so blissful, if this night had never ended. And as the weary, red eyed revellers shuffle out the door, there remains nothing left, nothing besides little zip lock bags, strewn empty 'cross the floor. |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» nothingnopenope replied on Tue Oct 14, 2003 @ 7:01pm |
 Coolness: 202135 | fantastic |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» PookStah replied on Tue Oct 14, 2003 @ 7:02pm |
 Coolness: 106825 | wow....
dan, i think u ahve way too much time on your hands |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» PoiSoNeD_CaNdY replied on Tue Oct 14, 2003 @ 7:04pm |
| Coolness: 92600 | ^^ haha thats true.
but literally i spent half an hour writing this in a coffee shop. i wrote it on two knapkins with a pencil |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» Nordic_Avenger replied on Tue Oct 14, 2003 @ 7:21pm |
| Coolness: 41075 | It was good, but I felt it needed more meat. |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» PoiSoNeD_CaNdY replied on Tue Oct 14, 2003 @ 8:58pm |
| Coolness: 92600 | comment, people, comment!!!
goddamit |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» wisp replied on Tue Oct 14, 2003 @ 9:00pm |
| Coolness: 98230 | i dont think you wouldve posted it if it sucked.
anyways, nice flow. needs more making fun of, though. |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» nothingnopenope replied on Tue Oct 14, 2003 @ 9:10pm |
| Coolness: 202135 | here is my poem
I call it FORTEEN YEAR OLD RAVER GIRL. I told my mommy I was sleeping next store but the real truth is I'm dancing to hardcore. She thinks I am talking about boys and hands but in reality there are glowsticks in my hands. Mommy might think I am sleeping in bed but what I'm realy doing Is giving a DJ head. Mommy thinks my bad mood is a teenage angst attack but the real story is my serotonin's out of wack. |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» Nordic_Avenger replied on Tue Oct 14, 2003 @ 9:13pm |
| Coolness: 41075 | Now Scotty, that's a poem! |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» wisp replied on Tue Oct 14, 2003 @ 9:15pm |
| Coolness: 98230 | NICE |
| Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» PookStah replied on Tue Oct 14, 2003 @ 9:16pm |
| Coolness: 106825 | that poem is awesome!!! |
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