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Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» AlienZeD replied on Sun Mar 22, 2009 @ 8:21pm
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Blast this flyer! (hopefully constructively)


I'm feeling will dj for money right now..
Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» El_Presidente replied on Sun Mar 22, 2009 @ 8:51pm
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the middle looks like a goatse
I'm feeling tipsy for prez 2009 right now..
Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» v.2-1 replied on Sun Mar 22, 2009 @ 8:58pm
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The font used doesn't scream psy either. More of a font I'd use for a techno or D&B flyer.

And I'm not feeling the middle "swirls" either. :-/
I'm feeling like nico bellic right now..
Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» Screwhead replied on Sun Mar 22, 2009 @ 9:22pm
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Originally Posted By EL_LEADER_MAXIMO

the middle looks like a goatse


QFT
I'm feeling your norks right now..
Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» AlienZeD replied on Sun Mar 22, 2009 @ 10:40pm
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what does qft mean?
I'm feeling will dj for money right now..
Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» MolocH replied on Sun Mar 22, 2009 @ 10:41pm
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Originally Posted By ALIENZED

what does qft mean?


Quite a FacT.
I'm feeling ballistic right now..
Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» DCRn replied on Sun Mar 22, 2009 @ 10:41pm
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Quoted for Truth.
I'm feeling repomanish right now..
Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» MolocH replied on Sun Mar 22, 2009 @ 10:41pm
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Originally Posted By DRNYARLATHOTEP

Quoted for Truth.


Fair enough:)
I'm feeling ballistic right now..
Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» karma.millie replied on Sun Mar 22, 2009 @ 10:53pm
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Originally Posted By SCREWHEAD

QFT


Quit fucking talking no?
I'm feeling wanna hug yo face! right now..
Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» neoform replied on Sun Mar 22, 2009 @ 11:13pm
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Originally Posted By KARMA.MILLIE

Quit fucking talking no?


.. no.
I'm feeling almighty right now..
Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» Rammius replied on Sun Mar 22, 2009 @ 11:15pm
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Make the swirls more pronounced, and use a gentler, trippier font. Add a few more swirls maybe or curve the sparks on the top left side.
I'm feeling is mildly perturbed right now..
Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» DCRn replied on Mon Mar 23, 2009 @ 12:31am
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"Quoted For Truth" - "qft" is a label used on Internet forums when someone quotes a debated statement, thereby ensuring that the original statement can not be edited or deleted by the person being quoted. Later also used as a sign of agreement with another poster.

Everything else is wrong :)
I'm feeling repomanish right now..
Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» Kishmay_Pinas replied on Mon Mar 23, 2009 @ 12:32am
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and what Dr N said is quite fucking true!

For a flyer, well er uhm let me state the obvious and say there is a whole shit load of info missing from it ;)
I'm feeling jungle jam in june! right now..
Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» E73V3N replied on Mon Mar 23, 2009 @ 12:50am
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Here are a few suggestions:
-Keep your format the same but make it a vertical one.
-U should leave some empty spots, there is too much going on at the same time on this flyer.
-Change your font
-make the gradient inside the font horizontal instead of vertical.
-Get your date more inside, it might be cut when printed
-add. some dots, or any graphic element around your font to draw attention there.
-dont bend your font like a rainbow, reminds me of power point.
-de-center your flyer to give a more dynamic feel.

I could do a quick 5 minute rough sketch to show u what i would do if u are interested.
Hope that was constructive !
Update » E73V3N wrote on Mon Mar 23, 2009 @ 1:02am
Here is a 5 in rough with the all the elements i sugested above.
Hope that will help

I'm feeling renard right now..
Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» DynV replied on Mon Mar 23, 2009 @ 1:43am
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Originally Posted By E73V3N

I could do a quick 5 minute rough sketch to show u what i would do if u are interested.


Wow that's real brute talent ! Kudos.
I'm feeling lucky that my countr right now..
Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» nothingnopenope replied on Mon Mar 23, 2009 @ 1:46am
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I'd try different fonts and I like the idea of the circles and the layout of the words in the sketch.. everything else seems par for course for a psy flyer.
I'm feeling meow right now..
Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» Gamos replied on Mon Mar 23, 2009 @ 2:14am
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Originally Posted By KARMA.MILLIE

Quit fucking talking no?


Its frangalis for "Quoi fuck the"
I'm feeling apathetic right now..
Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» AlienZeD replied on Mon Mar 23, 2009 @ 2:19am
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damn, that's frickin nice! :O can I... can I use that? it would make some sick posters. I'll give you one :D
how did you make that fence like octagon grid?

I was gonna show y'all some potential back of the flyer shots but now I'm all shy!

here goes nothing (really, nothing compared to what a real graphic artist can do)









basically those are different potential backgrounds, but I'd love for y'all to totally rip it apart and shame my graphic lack of talent.
now that I look at it, the dj name aren't readable enough
I'm feeling will dj for money right now..
Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» Screwhead replied on Mon Mar 23, 2009 @ 2:30am
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I'm feeling your norks right now..
Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» Nathan replied on Mon Mar 23, 2009 @ 2:38am
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i like the 1st one best...it's a fine flyer. don't stress yourself out too much with perfecting a flyer, as long as he info is there & legible, and it's pretty :) The front is more important as far as 'looks' are concerned...

for the DJ names, the font is cool, but yeah, you might want to make the letters a little bigger & brighter, and put some space between the letters.

it's a little crowded w/ various pictures too, but i'm just a minimalist :p

wicked line-up, btw!

no need to rip the flyer apart, unless it's to make a filter for a joint - lol
I'm feeling you up right now..
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