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| seriously I'm just looking for feedback
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| the text hurts my eyes, especially the dj lineup |
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| hey I AM the motherfuckin` lion king!
you should have put JOO in your line up. |
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| I'm feeling too much work right now.. |
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| all of the text? which parts specifically? or is it a general dislike of the flyer itself? |
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| nope, the flyer is nice, especially the background but the text used for hte Dj names is very abusive on my eye focus. it's like too bright but not clear.. wierd. |
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| Br34th3 |
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| the 4 in that font doesn't look like an A. :\
it's going to be changed anyways |
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| lose all the outer glow... ALL OF IT! |
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| I'm feeling funkier than james right now.. |
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| Originally Posted By RAWALI
lose all the outer glow... ALL OF IT!
But.. but... Outer Glow is the new Lens Flare! |
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| font being changed, outer glow prolly |
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| kk, ready, aim, fire!! (your criticisms)
 Update » AlienZeD wrote on Mon Dec 8, 2008 @ 7:32pm where's a graphic designer when I need one eh? :P |
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| contact Hadrien, he makes wicked design, maybe he could help you... (space gathering 2008 flyer, Electronik Brain, etc...) hadrien_laporte@hotmail.com |
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| I'm a graphic designer... I work for kami-case [ www.kami-case.com ]
its better
you really must remove that black border, that'd be step one of making the whole thing breathe (no kalan, not you :P ) a lil'... I'd say lose the pics on the right, they don't really bring anything constructive to the the whole design... consider that those lil squres'll be less the 3/4 of an inch (aka way to small to see em. Try and print out a copy on your home printer just to give yourself an idea of how big the elements are and if the fonts are in the right sizes...
If possible, I'd remove the whole "psychedelic enviroment, killer sound system blah blah blah, inexpensive water" and give some more imprtance to the name of the party... youre close to having a good Z effect although i think the name of the party is a bit to high up to get noticed, obviously, if you lose the extra text you're gonna lose some of that Z effect but I think it'll still work because of the delimitation between those two pics in your background montage... I would suggest though, to try and make that transition a bit more natural than just a lil feather... I personally like to add some noise to the mask of that transition area, and you might wanna match that blue-ish hue on the top image...
hope this helps |
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| thx man :) Update » AlienZeD wrote on Wed Dec 10, 2008 @ 2:21am what exactly do you mean by Z effect though? |
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| I think it<s great. MAybe it could use a little more colors tough? 0_o |
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| dude,it's a daaaark event...colors must die. |
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latest version, less blatant color, but more colors across... diff text...
let me know!
I realize at this point that it's not really a GREAT back of flyer, but any advice on making it better is much appreciated.
wally: thx again, I took most of your advice I think, the text and the images I am keeping just cause I do personally find they add a lil something, am not ignoring you :)
also, I realize I say nothing about venue, do people know enough to call the infoline? |
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| Z basicly means that u read from top left to right then u go down to the left and read to the right again |
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| ah cool, kinda like the shape of a Z.. thx :) |
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