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The Line - By Milton Clark
Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» ufot replied on Wed Mar 25, 2009 @ 1:20pm
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as always any feedback is welcomed and appreciated

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Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» Choda_Bean replied on Thu Mar 26, 2009 @ 6:18pm
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well, i'm not a huge fan of the 8-bit sounding buildup effect, but nothing critical cuz it goes with the rest of the track, however i don't really like that nasty stab from the beginning...
also your drums could be a little better worked and chosen. (i'm assuming that's the sound you were looking for, but i'm just shooting out there the first thoughts that i get from listenning to the tune)

i did like the first mid sounding stab. also the arp sounding bassline is kick ass, i really like what you did with it at the beginning, where it staggers slower and faster, and the other melody that comes in later in the track is also dope...

overall i think its a good tune, i would just work on replacing certain sounds here and there, and pimping the buildups and breaks more....maybe add sum fucked up vocal snippets to liven it up too.
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Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» databoy replied on Thu Mar 26, 2009 @ 7:13pm
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Cool track, gritty and mean with a bit of confusion for good measure.
However, I find the drum a bit square (the clap/hat) . There are moments when it plays off the bass and gets a little groovier, and it would be nice to hear more of that.
Quality production.
Do you mix any of your tracks in your sets?
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Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» PonChalice replied on Thu Mar 26, 2009 @ 7:39pm
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yeah, i like it. the pitch bending thing on the baseline is weird and cool.

... i guess id suggest that the "8bit crunchyness" could be a little softer or something like that. maybe its linked with the hat/clap thing and your eq?

anywhoot, nice one!
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Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» ufot replied on Fri Mar 27, 2009 @ 11:15am
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cheers guys!!! thanks loads for teh feedback!!! Im considering a redo or second mixdown...

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Good [+1]Toggle ReplyLink» Screwhead replied on Fri Mar 27, 2009 @ 11:50am
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It sounds alright, my only real problem with it is that at times the 8-bit melody sounds out of beat, especially when it's playing all alone during the first buildup.. I dunno if it's just me, but it really doesn't sound like it lines up at 4/4 all the time..
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The Line - By Milton Clark
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